The Box

Anne is going to be the loose sort of character--perhaps acting as rivalry later on as the affair between Ellen and the Marquis (the name reminds me so much of ...

An interesting story, especially for one so very short. Commentary on how kids are easily influenced by adults, and gain their habits and mannerisms—as well as their bigotry. Just a ...

This has interesting potential. Once again, this boils down to a simple show-not-tell type of critique. You're simply going on and telling us things that happened. It's the reason why ...

I know what you said in your last post, but I placed so much effort into writing a critique. I don't want it to go to a waste. ;_; There's ...

I will make a promise to you. If you space this post out, I will review the work. Currently, the entire work is entire bulky and straining to decipher. No ...

What lies below has been extracted from the middle of the beginning. So there are going to be some things you need to know, Sekar is a priest from a ...

Usually people fight here to rid most poems of abstract nouns. I see it appearing all the time, almost to the point where I was considering swooping down into every ...

It's very nice, but I have some suggestions. Some people think the poem is long and intimidating to look at, and while it is in your right to make your ...

Best part ever. After that moment, I would always turned to my friends and pointed out the general motifs and imagery of the work. Like in the shower scene after ...

[/sarcasm] I'm sorry. I blame the internet. But if you'd like to know, there was a time when I was jealous of him. Now, that time no longer exists since ...

it is not in your right--Everyone, to make fun of this man. he is cool and has a book published. you have no right. who are you? you don't have ...

A few months ago, nearly more than half-a-year ago, I rekindled a love-affair with prose and short stories right after reading Neil Gaiman's Fragile Things, (i wish I were him ...